All Comments on 'Indian Mom's Mid-Life Crises Ch. 02'

Two parts as yet and the story still doesn’t seem to be going anywhere, does it?

I like the progress so far, to be frank. The story could have possibly give into a little more detail - feels like the author felt a bit pressured to submit a sequel to the first part quickly. But, as I always say to first time writers - just keep writing! That's the only way to improve. :-)