All Comments on 'Indian Village Girl trapped in USA Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Superb...can't wait for more...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
That's hot!! Getting excited for the Sharia Law part

That's hot!! Getting excited for the Sharia Law part

SusmittaSusmittaabout 4 years ago
Awesome written

As the time of quarantin, lockeddown situatuion, we want daily update of this series as it is going great so far. Amazing writing. Mindblowing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great stuff

Please more

Let experience the Father after the son . & make habby watch how real men take her

Let go through more BBC experience including dp & gang bang.

Show yo be more confident in needs .

merrySMmerrySMover 3 years ago
Good premise

Liked the story. Keep writing.

But....Please, please, this just doesn't work.

"...He pushed all of his cock into her anus in one go, resulting in a loud scream from Meghna. He then slapped her ass as he kept ramming..."

Cocks do not just "into her anus in one go,". Never happens, unrealistic, we want you to "show, not tell". The anus must be prepared somewhat. Fingers, one by one, stretching.

Give us details.

How did it feel, to her. Thick, fat, hard,.

What did she feel, excitement, shame for enjoying the forbidden taboo act

Humiliation etc.

techie_usetechie_usealmost 3 years ago

wow.. wwhat a rough ride.. loved it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fap thrice to this. Absolute masterpiece.

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