All Comments on 'Indian Wife Swarna Ch. 04'

You should try Grammarly or some such similar software to get your grammar organised.

Her shy on outside and sluty on inside has completely gone now. Yes I had boner throughout this part still, it fell you should have focused more on shy, teasing, lust all these aspects more. Thank you and eagerly waiting for more.

couldve been a longer teasing session...

It's HOT

Beautiful! All it needs is continuos persistent encouragement in the right direction from the husband who needs to be completed committed.

The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight Asian conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content.

Asian Indian women must understand nearly all woman 99% including their mother and sister have enjoyed and are enjoying outside marriage. It is perfectly fine. Only nobody talks about it openly like in the Western world.

You will disappoint many readers unless you post at least one more chaper in this series.

Don' t judge the popularity of your storis solely based on present-day ratings. Some users give one star to each and every new story in which the wife is a potential, or an actual, cheater. Your stories will, by the end of the year, have a 4.4 rating (4+).

I did not calulate for all stories but they are getting a lot of "faves". E.g. Ch. 2 has so far got 4 faves out of 6,170 views, which is 0.65 faves per 1K views (an excellent faves-to-views ratio!)

Keep up the good work for the sake of your fans.

Awesome