All Comments on 'Infall Ch. 08'

I refresh every night at midnight to read this, and I am so happy that it is always there.

I do have one small peeve (which I know you can't correct because it is finished) - she is so smart, and learned the language so quickly, that she should be speaking it without constant errors by now. It has been months.

Thanks tor posting. I check every morning. In love with the world you have built with words.

Pro is I like the general concept of this tale, and I find Indya very endearing. Con is that I just don't feel much for Zen and Kythe, and consequently, not as invested in this tale compared to your other tales. Also, not sure where the non-con parts are?

Great story ! thank you for sharing.

Really enjoying this, since this is finished can you reveal how many parts there are in total?

@Anonymous I like her broken language - it's endearing and it wouldn't improve at the same rate if no-one is actively correcting her phrasing. Atlantis people are just well-educated en mass.

I love that you make your women so brilliant. It's refreshing.