by Michale1
your tags say revenge but their was no revenge
your tags say sexting but their was no sexting
your tags say cheating but their was no cheating
finally your worst crime, even worse than lying with all your tags, you used the word orchid
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one star for lying
Might have scored it higher if the author had taken the time to explore the conversations and interactions outside of the increase in their sex life.
I was confused by this well written story from someone who had just published a second story with zero Followers to show for it. Well it is as word perfect as one can get relying on computer spell-checking, and is was a VERY realistic love-making scene. Altho I was disappointed at the lack of resolution to this affair, I still gave it 4stars, my usual top rating. Do keep 'em coming Michale1, altho my chances of catching a sequence featuring Carol are slim.
Nice start. Define the slut's digital relationship better. Was it phone sex, texting, pics, video? Had she met with him? Will the husband go after him now, with her ?
We never actually got a story here, there was some supposition but no substance. No conversation, no confrontation just a vague assumption.
Perhaps the younger crowd would get off on this story but you need some character development.
Great start! Looking forward to hearing more! Hope to hear about what she was doing with her online friend!
Fix the TAGS! Exactly what was the online cheating? Story is totally without context in the absence of a description... You have totally painted the guy as a cuck when the readers have no idea if it was a justified description.... What was the revenge?
I was invested because it explored the sexual side of jealousy and the repercussions of emotional infidelity . Do guys really wake up and become more passionate when their ownership rights are threatened? If you communicate virtually are you really cheating if you never consummate physically? I really was intrigued because he turned it around and they both benefitted sexually as he became more sexually aggressive in order to prove himself and exact his revenge he took it out on her sexually instead of fighting . Dont stop writing. You are really good at capturing the intensity of male sexual revenge . You are very talented in your ability to make the scenario come to life. Keep up the good work ! I want to know what Carol's partners name is. I want to know more of why she sought out online chat rooms. Did she think it was the safest way or the least hurtful way to explore after being unfulfilled for so long? ..... I was excited to see the Alpha male take over . As a female I liked it very much. I was impressed !
@muskyboy the infidelity occurs in the heart. Whether there was physical sex, sexting or something else is immaterial. She displaced her husband’s place in her heart with the desires for another.
Digital cuckolding must be a new thing! LOL!! We can live without it. Two stars ⭐️ for this one.
I remember Carol… she was a 6 on a scale of 10,
I would have fucked her if she lived closer to me, but I wasn’t gonna travel the 1200 miles to do her.
I usually starts with a emotional affair. Woman seek that connection usually before the physical fucking . The work force created and evened out the woman cheating as much as men because of opportunity. There are the just fuck me woman also . The Mexican contractor was fucking this married mom in her early 30’s . I walked in and he had her head pulled back by her hair over bags of cement really pounding her ass calling her every name under the sun. He then made her get on her knees and clean her ass off his dick in front of three of us . Embarrassed she left in a hurry. He fucks her every day and brings him lunch a few times a week . She also gave them dinner when hubby walked in but she told him they fixed something in bathroom for them and he was nice , if he only knew. The last week on the job the kid had a game two states away and he and another dped her . He works in the area and continues to fuck her . She craves the depraverity of it all and even lets the film her. That will end bad I’m sure
She would have been kicked to the curb the instant I found out. Then I would have gone after him.
Just another pathetic loti Beta boy rider. They can only write about what they know, which is their own life and their inherent feelings. Because they are just a suitable male , not a real man by any real man's definition. I was raised by my grandparents and my parents to always have a little bit more love and respect for myself than anybody out there, including the wife and my kids. And that's where i've lived my life. If my wife's gonna become a cheating bitch , her ass will be the kirk so fast that her it'll be spinning.