All Comments on 'Infidelity Revisited Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
open air sex, the best

only been outside 2 times with my ex.once in a park at midnight. and the other was at a high schhool football game

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

You are writing about a slutty skank.

What a bitch, the least she could do is let her BF go first.

Lousy slut.

1/5

Hullo2uHullo2uover 3 years ago
I love your writing

Hi! I love your style of writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
superb story telling

Charmaine's ongoing relationship with Ryan cannot be properly understood without first reading My Girlfriend's Best Friend. Charmaine is no "slut", as some readers complain, but a girl who is seeking for true love, and trying to find it when Danny does not give it. As My Girlfriend's Best Friend reveals, Danny is no innocent victim of Charmaine's unfaithfulness, and this reviewer recommends that My Girlfriend's Best Friend be read prior to reading Infidelity Revisited. It will place the context of Charmaine's actions in a much more understandable light. As for those who complain that there is too much eroticism in this story, they fail to understand that it is not only integral to the plot, but usually so intertwined with the plot that the two cannot be properly separated without being detrimental to both. To the contrary, the erotic material is essential to the overall development of the ongoing story. Five stars.

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