by River3860
Very nice story! I hope you will be writing additional chapters.
Dr2Strict
Very hot. I hope Paul doesn’t wait too long before enjoying his daughter.
Nicely developed,an impressive tale for a first work.hope to see it continue
Great storyline, good character build up, slow, sensual and very intriguing 😉! I surely hope that this doesn't become just a one and done, one shot story. Please consider continuing the story line! I really am enjoying what you have written so far, keep up the excellent work and thanks for sharing your awesome story with us.
5/5! Erotic, sweet, sad, kind, loving, attentive to the real problems of Work (pay, career, accidents and diseases).
Excellently drawn characters, with their different ages, different experiences, doubts and pains.
Excellent math puns. Oops: "Barely" excellent.
Even the description of the house is perfect!
please keep writing about these three characters. They deserve to be chosen as protagonists for a 52-episode TV series.