All Comments on 'Inheritance Ch. 02'

tazz what does that tag at the end of your posts mean for those of us that are totally stupid?

never mind just saw it on your bio page

I love this story and hope to read the next submission soon.

The only problem, is we need more! Now you've done it, gone and whet our appetites. Back to work, (cracks the whip). :)

great story love it more please

Usually not a fan of bondage, but this story has captured my interest. Please keep future installments coming!

I cant wait to see him bringing in the new sub from the office lol great job

So glad you finally continued this story!

Good story can't wait to read the next chapter

Keep it up!

Great job so far. Don't forget about his former coworker who was into being a sub.

Looking forward to more of this fantastic story. As others have mentioned.....the office sub should make another appearance!

Really enjoyed this very well written story in proper English. Look forward to many more installments - especially about voluptious Eva. Wouldn't they all make a wonderful team. Please, keep up the good work.

I know , but I couldn't help myself .Awesome chapter , but just not long enough . Thanks

Love the slow build-up with Eva and the fleshing out of Jane and Elizabeth. Awesome job so far.

Your story is awesome!!! I really hope that you continue it. I look forward to reading more.

to leave someone bound w/o supervision, especially "...draped it round Jane's neck..."

Mike was a novice.

reading the comments I notice one poster asked about the abbreviations that always follow the comments of another person. But when looking for the comment that had been referenced, I could not find one by her. How and why do posted comments disappear?

Writers have the option to delete any comments they do not like.

For myself I don't think this is very honest - you have to take the rough with the smooth - even if they are the anonymous trolls who snipe at even the best stories. However you also get comments which are just plain spam, they get deleted.

if his mum and gran are subs, how do these comments within the story reconcile with what I am learning about acceptable behaviour?

"something I am still trying to come to terms with. Anyway she batted my hands away" --

there were a couple of other times when the "subs" directed him, or even admonished him to behave in a certain manner.

are these a moments of clarity? or a lapse in the "lifestyle"?

In so many of the stories I have read the dominant person is suddenly an expert, or the submissive is totally submissive, almost like a switch had been flipped on. The basic premise for this story isn't a particularly realistic one, but I have tried to keep it grounded in real human behaviour. Human relationships are never clear-cut black and white affairs, so yes sometimes the subs show Mike what they want, as he himself seeks to learn.

Mike is writing his own book on the subject and he's doing it his way, as long as everyone gets what they want from the relationships - and in this story that's what really counts isn't?

as this so called lifestyle is not my thing

My personal opinion and that is all it is,, any slut that wants to be owned and abused is totally worthless waste of skin

Again , my personal opinion,, any queer that wants to own a women and abuse her should be taken out behind the barn and beat to death

My opinion,, A relationship is 2 people madly in love and are EQUALS, not put before one another to use and abuse

Sorry I know this type of shit goes on everyday, just not my thing

LLP

Wow. I cum to each of your stories!

I am enjoying the story very much, even though I have a history in D/s. I want to make one comment. In the switching scene you describe the following: "Jane switched her across the lower back, the tip of the switch reaching around as it landed and marking Elizabeth's ribs." I feel there should have been a disclaimer as this is not recommended for tyros. Any readers wishing to try something like this should be discouraged from hitting anywhere around the small of the back up to the lower ribs. The risk of damage to the kidneys is great! Apart from that I think it's great!

Glad you're enjoying the story Ratu.

I appreciate what you're saying about using the switch, or any other device around the lumbar area and kidneys. I didn't know that,and if I had I probably would have phrased it differently. It's definitely something people should be aware of. However - and not in anyway intending to take it lightly - the two ladies in the story aren't new to the game, so I am sure they would be careful.

I hope you carry on enjoying the story and would like to hear more of what you think.

I can see why I was told I needed to look you up. Great writing, great narration, and the fact that he is a newbie and is learning to be the Master and owner of these ladies make it all the better to read.

Wait! Someone told you to look me up?!

The author has almost grasped the emotional, mental and physical relationship between nastyer and submissive. The mental/emotional insecurity of the son/new master reflects real world situations. I appreciate the preparation the deceased grandfather gave to assist his grandson to evolve into a true master of the two women he loved more than himself, to wit: his wife and daughter.

Another excellent chapter. Thank you.