All Comments on 'Inheritance Pt. 02'

Every chapter just makes me want more. Who will be next to want money and did someone kill Greta? I need to know.

Good one but please do post the next instalment as soon as possible.

It could of been better. It needs more depth, plus I'm still waiting to see if he shuts down his gold digging family.. has room for improvement hopefully the next one will be better.

Agree with some other comments - Usually you do a great job of balancing good sex with an intricate weaving of relationships and love. From the first part, this story puts straight lust and sex right out there for the readers with only minimal connection to some underlying story arc. Maybe you'll get around to leading us to something bigger in the coming parts, at least I hope so. 4*

Better than the first part, and liked the introduction of the two cousins. The first people who are sleeping with Jesse not just for money but also gratitude for helping them with out with no strings or favors attached and might care for Jesse well bring. Unlike the mother and aunt who only do it for the money and don't really care if they turned there husband that they say the still love into cucks. Their love of money is so great that they were so willing to cross moral lines so easily just for money sake. My only other criticism is that you should not skip over or fast forward the sex scenes to much; sometimes people, including me like a good sense even its from a recurring lover.

happy to get this chapter waited awhile look forward to the next thanks

Thanks for an entertaining romp. I look forward to reading your stories whenever they come out. Keep them coming :D

AS USUAL, AN EXCELLENT 5 STAR STORY!

Very good story. Looking forward to the next chapters

If it is 100 percent owned by either greta or Jesse there is nothing the cfo could do to take over. Good grief. Washington requires no reason to fire someone. Or to quit for that matter. Even if they had contracts both had performance issues they would be terminated for.

Sterling engines have been proven time and again to be a dream.

What does this company make its money from? Lots of ideas no substance

I liked this, he's fucking his way through his extended family! There is some odd grammar and incorrect use of some words in there unfortunately, which tended to put me off slightly.......for example, there is no such worh as 'prideful' the word you're looking for is 'proud' Aside from the odd thing like that I enjoyed the story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. You have built a good base for this story with lots of possibilities for this to be one helluva raunchy tale. Bring it on!

This is ok but I and my friends that read your stories were hoping for more of Pharoahs Curse and Porn Star Family, there the best of all your stories.

Great story 5*****. Please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter.....

Love the story. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

I look forward to the next chapter. I hope you don't take as long to publish it. I had to go back and re-read the first part in order to refresh my memory.

Great story can’t wait for the next one

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A very yummy addition to this story! Fingers crossed that there is more to come! Thank you!

Excellent. Waiting for more - this story has the potential to go on forever (or almost!). Thank you for a most entertaining read; well worth five stars, more if they were available.

Just loving this story. Please don’t make us wait too long for Ch 3.

Scores 5/5

Waiting on more. Now part of my favorites.

Great story hope for another chapter soon keep up the good work.

Eighty/Twenty

That is about the best ratio of sex to story telling. Please continue. Jessie seems to be a bit lacking.

really really like this story. this may sound crazy to you but i think i would like the story as well maybe better with a little less sex and more. business etc. but thats just my opinion. really good read. keep it up. mike

Need more SOOOOOON!!! Have been enjoying this story, like that he sees through people and help's those that need it. Can't wait to see where things lead, please keep them coming soon.

A good story though if I had any complaint was the sex was not focused on and it continues what seems like a recent trend in some of your works where the wife is having her cucked husband eating her lovers jizz, a trope I'm fairly sure showed up in Miracle Cream and Spellbound. Not exactly something I care for personally but purely personal opinion, the humiliation aspect I'm usually not a fan of. Still overall a good story and another easy 5. You are cranking them out.

I'm enjoying this story, it has a nice flow and had excellent continuity. Looking forward to where it's going to take us.

I enjoyed the Robin Williams joke reference with programing the rover from inches to meters “now it’s the Mars barrier!”

5 stars. Really hope you keep this series going. Keep up the great work.

Such a great series. I know this chapter took a while to write but I hope there is plenty more to come. Keep up the amazing work

Another excellent story really looking forward to the character development and to see how they interact with each other and how he will deal with the threats from the ones he has fired. If they know what is going on how will he deal with their threats to him and the company, also did his aunt foresee this development with her relatives and if so what plans has she put in place to help him.

Loved it and hope next chapter is cumming soon.

Would love more encounters with Patricia

Loved the reference to the Mars Climate Orbiter it was interesting to note you had all the right facts well done

Strugglong a little but if thevstoryline develops with Jesse becoming a more formidable character it cojld really go somdwhere. Intrigued to know where Ruth and Brianna will fit in later.

5 stars waiting for the next chapter.

Can't wait for the next chapter . Loved it

Don’t care for the mom or the aunt in his life.

Any update on the next part?

Hope this comes back soon!

great story

when can we expect part 3

would love to read more about Ruth and Bree

will there be more of this story or is it dead?????????

please continue

I really enjoyed this story. Will you be continuing the store? I hope you do.

Excited for more….

This story has had me keen to read each page. I like the characters and the interplay between them. Look forward to the next release. Thanks for what has been written sofar soul71.

I am really enjoying this . Could you please continue it

I'm just going to leave this here for you Kennyboy82.

prideful

[ˈprīdf(ə)l]

ADJECTIVE

having an excessively high opinion of oneself.

Might want to brush up on the dictionary before you say something isn't a word.

Had big fun up to the end of ch.2. There is much to be resolved, some get even baby's to plant

and some corporate pussy to align. That much money begs the design of a serious harem.

R. G. Thad Becker

Safe to say this series is dead or????

Looking forward to the continued series

Ready for next chapter please

Would like to see the next chapter. It looks like you post every 6 months. Could we move that to every 3?

Please sir, I’d like some more

Does anyone know what other stories ruth grander in

I think that Soul71 has abandoned this storyline, shame really, it has some really good possibilities for where he could go with it.

you are one of my favorite authors,

getting bored reading the same chapters, when is the next chapter coming out

It is good but it needs an ending .So much more should be coming . Not leaving it hanging like it is .

Don’t leave it hanging what is going to happen between him and Ruth.

Time to finish the story , so far so good but left a lot of people hanging .

Shame, another good story, left hanging.

Very disappointing that this story is not finished. I am hoping that since the author is still posting on this site that maybe there is hope that this story might actually be finished some day.

Amazing story thank you very much for sharing ... looking forward to the next part please finish this great story ... definitely recommend reading

Hopefully your doing well ... definitely reading your other stories

To be continued? WHEN?????

Not sure why this story is unfinished as it has a very interesting storyline. 5 stars to this point. Hopefully the author will see the comments of all the readers who want a conclusion and finish the story.

That's it????????????

I agree with the previous comments below, get your fucking arse into gear and finish this amazing story… ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ For a little inspiration….

I do hope that the author intends to complete this exceptional story, these two chapters have been extremely interesting.

author has many stories started and many month's between chapters. Common occurrence here.

That’s it 🤷🏼‍♂️🤷🏼‍♂️ no part 3 since 2021

Can we please get another part to this?

Love this series and looking forward to more adventures with Jesse in future chapters!!

I do like the general tale however he could stand to dump or at least downplay involvement with some of his relatives. In particular his mother and aunt seem to be leaches. Otherwise, the story is firming up nicely. I hope it resolves.

off to a great start. There must be a great deal more. So, where is it?

[30.10.22]

Great start, many dangling threads...

Still, for what is there:

11/10!!!!!

Is there still a chance for a third chapter?

Come on please don’t leave this story unfinished that would be a crime.

Good start and looking forward to more of the story.

Hopefully progress is being made on future chapters.

What a wonderfully lecherous family. Pretty sure Linda is his Aunt instead of cousin though

Please come back to this story it’s potential is enormous and I’m sorry but it’s just a waste if you don’t write plenty more chapters so please please please pull your finger out ASAP.

I’ve been reading the comments and Kennyboy82 use your brain and google before making a cock out of yourself. This author has wrote many many many great stories with very few mistakes spelling or words wise just a thought for next time you jump in head first into a swimming pool that is only 6 inch deep.

Such a great story. have you thought about returning to this story? would love to read more

I loved the story but why hasn't it been added to ? the last time was 5/21 please add more to it .

Please finish this story! The last update was a year and a half ago! :-(

The story was going along great; I voted 5 stars for both parts; Please continue it!

Thanks

More please much much more asap

Like so many of your storie(s), this one gets you addicted and keen to discover what's happening between the characters. Hope you can post more updates on this one Soul71, soon please.

Thanks for the effort you put into making these captivating tales and strories.

hi this is a great story looks like writer has a few more parts to go like woman at gas station, uncle other aunt and lawyer would love to read more chapters

I hope that you have plans to continue with this story. I have enjoyed reading it.

Brian

Great series, I wish you would continue it.

Hope more from this story series. There just has to be more.

Good story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for putting in the hard work needed to build these worlds for us to enjoy.

Please write the next part. There are so many matters to be explained like his Graet Aunts death, the lady from the petrol station and what happens with several of the women in his life. The story has me captivated and I would dearly love to know how it develops.

were is the rest of this story

We need more! Keep going with this story

Excellent story!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Are you going to do a part 3? This has been great

Part 3!!! Please!!! A year since this installment is just too long!!!

Waiting for the next chapter.

Please continue this story. It is great so far. 5 stars