Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Inherited Desires Ch. 02'

by Saekoinstockings

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 1 Comment
sinfulwolfsinfulwolfover 2 years ago

You have a delightfully debaucherous imagination, and you're little setting here is proving to be delightfully perverse. Do keep that up, lot of kinks packed into here. Degradation seems to be your big one. Very fast paced as well.

If I may? One criticism I have is why they feel Sean is being creepy, when they are all in some kind of incestual relationship. Seems a bit off. Also, be careful with how you split your scenes. Without any kind of break they seem to almost blend together.

Keep writing, keep working at it.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
userSaekoinstockings@Saekoinstockings
3 Stories
55 Followers
Hello all, I love writing and take requests. Usually I try to fit all my writings in a single world, there will be many easter eggs.

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Inherited Desires Ch. 01 Previous Part
Inherited Desires Series Info