All Comments on 'Initiation Pt. 02'

His wife is one of the whores and his whole life has been manipulated from the beginning.

Has a forgiving heart, and he is not as dumb as you are trying to make him look.

Well developed series of clues. I am very interest to see where this plays out and if I am close to what I think is going on. I am enjoying your story very much...Thank you

I can only see a sad ending to this one. 4 stars

...to part 3. Well done!

so she is a slut and you get all you want from anybody he needs to decide a wife that is a whore or divorce

Is that all the characters are assholes or bitches. They're all about power and money. And Ted is the worst of them all. Show him the trappings of wealth and a little titty and he caves, leaving all his morals behind. Blinded by the light. Men like him are a dime a dozen and women like Audrey can be bought off the pages of Craigslist. UGH!

It holds the reader's attention and compels them to read further. Raventree comes across as very sinister. The wives are more involved than the husbands are allowed to know. A great place to be from. Far...from. ****

to just figure out she is the company whore and he is a cheater.

KB - I love your stories and THANK YOU for writing. I wish I could write so well.

Why is everyone so upset? The author simply used this chapter to introduce the fact that the lead man and woman are not in love, never have been, and do not suffer from one of those pretty marriages you all think you have or had before (s)he left you.

- If the wife is a company whore, so what, his only use for her is when he’s home bored from fucking the other company whores and she openly accepts her role going back three generations

- If the wife is not a company whore, so what, nothing in the sentence above changes

- Either way he gets his promotion and she fulfills her true purpose

WIN, WIN, WIN for both of them - a true happy ending (which is rare in LW).

This story is not about husbands and wives or love and marriage. It is simply about the base human desire for sex, money, and power - and those willing to go the extra mile to achieve it.

Shame is KB, none of the characters are deserving of any sympathy. He dumped his GF for the pretty, rich girl that would secure his future at this firm.

Effectively he is being held to ransom, marry the grand daughter or don't get promoted. But he is doing it voluntarily. There is nothing stopping him leaving the firm or taking the high ground and refusing initiation. Trouble is he would lose access to all the other prostitutes, I mean wives, while Audrey has been brought up to expect to be a company cum bucket.

Guessing next chapter has the incest tag as I'm sure daddy and grandpa are going to leave sloppy 3rds for Ted.

Given what he was like in the Caribbean, there's no way he can complain about Audrey getting extra curricular.

Now if, as was implied he was feeling guilty about getting some at the initiation and that was his only dalliance, then maybe he might have an argument... it's only once and secures his promotion, just expect Audrey's only once at some point.

Revolting people, not only only concerned with power and wealth, totally obsessed with not sharing it out.

Obviously his wife is one of the company whores

King is always a "King"

Fantastic situation created by aura of 'thrill & mystery', blended with lust and longing.

It seems that, what is good for 'Gander' also good for 'Goose'

Both are enjoying ,with "curtain" drawn to cover up

Eagerly awaiting !!!...

And the next chapter?

There was 45 days between chapter 1 and chapter 2. It's been 31 days since chapter 2 and still no chapter 3. There shouldn't be more than a week between chapters. If unable to do this, authors should wait until all chapters are complete before releasing the first one, either on a daily, or at most weekly basis. I blame the administrators of this site for allowing, this from here to eternity gap between chapters.

I hope that everything is ok for King B....

I've stopped reading multi-chapter stories until the final chapter has posted. No complaint, but I am looking forward to reading your story once it is finished.

Looking forward to the year 2022, when the next chapter is completed and submitted.

This story makes no sense without an ending.

I think the author had planned on a third chapter. Since the last chapter was over two months ago, without an explanation why the long delay. It's very possible something unfortunate has happened to King Bandor.

We are waiting !

Creepy sinister. Can only imagine what’s to come.

Noting the comments below I checked the author page. Only on other story was posted within a day or 2 of this and nothing since. As I wrote this in March 2022 it’s now 7 months since the last post. I hope we did not lose this expert storyteller

STILL LOOKING FOR THE "END".

EXPECTING FULFILLMENT OF L...ONG AWAIT

Very good -- fun read..

Finished this?

I so hate unfinished jobs, specially when the story is so promising. I hope you will find the time to complete this story, and maybe other unfinished yet

I HATE UNFINISHED STORIES!! Where's FTDS when you need him?

Well..damn. this had potential

story is great. Where is part three??????????

You get off writing enticing stories & leaving your readers in a lurch, don't you?!

You HAD the potential of being as GREAT an author as George Anderson but neigh!

I'd like to think Covid got you & your story endings are not your new style!

I rated you a 1 with no ending, with a potential of 5+ with an ending.

Bander answered an email I sent him in Dec 2022 asking about future stories. This was his reply "I just haven't really had the time and inclination to do any work for Literotica.com. I have had to focus on things that actually can be monetized, as hobbies don't pay the bills"