All Comments on 'Innocence Lost'

Oh Catherine. Of course I loved it. Every bit of it.

Sara

I love the forced nudity fantasy, I share it with many folks no doubt. I hope to have my wife put me in a similar situation soon

This was a GREAT job of clarifying differences! You made clear the distinction between public nudity and exhibitionism and between "forced" exhibitionism and what this site calls non-consent/reluctance. Moreover, your character (you) handled your walk up to the towel as an exhibitionist, not a streaker, would...slow walk as if nothing were wrong and you were fully clothed.

My ONLY regret is that I wasn't in Adelaide and on that beach that day!

WOW i need a friend like Sara!!!

huggs

suzanne

A very well-written exposé of an exquisitely felt experience. Catherine is clearly an educated, articulate woman who enjoys her sexuality and is prepared to exhibit her inner thoughts for our enjoyment. I applaud this, her first story, and look forward to more of her erotic adventures.

Catherine I found your story very erotic and arousing. Such a lovely story nicely and lovingly told. Please share more of your experiences and fantasies.

Nikki

I don't know how you can resist her.

Catherine's story is as wonderful as everything else

about her.

Bethany

Kudos to you, Catherine.

This was a very well done bit of erotica. Your pacing was unhurried, your phrasing superb. I really want to convey how thoroughly I enjoyed this story. In my opinion it is definitely one of the better works I've seen on this site.

Please keep writing.

Bob

Great story!!! My husband and I live in a nude resort in California. It sounds like you would have a great time here. Please write more and if you ever come to California send me an E-mail. Thanks for a well written and arousing story.

Dawn

Catherine, I love your story. It is beautifuly and lovingly written not to mention erotic and very arousing. Innocence Lost is the best erotic story I have read for a long time. Please keep up the excellent work. My husband says thanks too, for obvious reasons.

Nikki

Wow, that was great, please write more of your experiences, it is so good to read about someone who has the same sort of feelings as I do. It made me feel all warm inside reading about Catherine being, sort of forced to expose herself; it sends shivers through me now just thinking about it again. I suppose it is the feeling that it is not me doing this it is someone else making me do it that allows the exhibitionist inside to come out, I know that is how I feel. The way you have written it is allows the “forced” to be enough for Catherine to exhibit herself but without it being too much, which is a real turn off, as you say more like coercion.

Please keep going, I cant wait for the next and the next and next…….

Lots of Love

Kathryn

A nice, slow, well written, erotic story. Well done. More please. Rusty

Loved the story, please write more. Thanks for the reply to my feedback too.

Fellow aussie Steve.

For your first story that was amazing. Thank you Catherine!

I look forward to reading many, many more of your stories.

Hello. This was a great story which was self-exsperienced. Just wonderful to read and to know that this will give new exsperiences in future. Thanks a lot for the young and nice sensuell women that do make the world a better place for us males :-) /Stefan

This is a great story! Well told and extremly exciting, from both a voyeors and an exhibisionist point of view!

Great job!

Most wonderful slow pacded arousing story...I can almost see you in your words !

wow, I can't wait for more. THANK YOU

What a sexy experience! The next time you could give the towel to Sara before she drove you home, or decline it when she offers it to you, just to get the thrill of maximizing the moments you spend naked in public.

In my opinion, getting naked sounds more like "Innocence Regained" than "Innocence Lost". Babies are born to the world naked. And they lose their innocence only moments later when they start the journey of a clothed life. lol

Being the only one naked – or among the naked minority – in a group or social situation is far more arousing than being naked when everyone else is naked. And nothing beats having a partner who understands your desire to realise your fantasies and dares you to your limits and beyond.

I’m pretty sure this will pave the way for even more audacious adventures! Keep ‘em cumming!

keep it up...

Such a lovely little first story! You expressed your feelings very well, giving me insight into the thrill of an exhibitionist. You dialogue is just right, too - something that is unusual in a first time writer. Will look forward to your next evolution.

And just phenomenal for a first submission.

We want more! Much more...

Thank you indeed Catherine. Well done on your opening submission. And your first story is great too.

David

I could barely contain myself...pun intended! Excellent, please write more!

Hi Catherine

I have read two of your storis and will certainly read your other submissions. They have both been excellent. Very natural writing leaving me with a true sense of your feelings and the imagery during the event.

Nice sensual build-up, you can feel the desire and needs.

Cioa B

It's already been said in the other comments. It's a wonderful piece of writing and an amazingly hot story.

I read this story and "The Next Day" -- unfortunately in inverse order -- and was most struck by how you captured the emotional response to learning that being exposed in public is something that excites you. It's a revelation that can be both terrifying and liberating at the same time and I was delighted to see how you conveyed that.

Enjoyed the story.

I have read this story severaal times. Do you still lose your bikini in the water? The story being true is amazing.

It's unfortunate that you can only vote once. I gave 5 *s. I loved the build-up and the surrender to the inevitable, while admitting not only the dread, but the mental stimulation also. You have an ability to emote your feelings with your written word that is rare. Thank you for what must be a considerable effort & hopefully you will keep writing.....Pat

knotz2u@yahoo.com

Catherine, your writing is just Brilliant. :)

Oh my! I had no trouble picturing the events of your story. I readily put myself in your position and found myself relishing in doing each successive bit including the climax!

Great story and very well told.