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Click hereThere was a knock at the door. "Catherine are you all right? It sounds like world war three in there." It was Sara, who had obviously been outside listening.
I turned on my side, curled up pulling a pillow between my legs and pressed it against my hot wet cunt, imagining it was my lover, maybe Sara. I smiled to myself savouring the moment and enjoying the glow that comes after such intense release and total sexual satisfaction.
"Yes Sara, thank you, everything is absolutely wonderful." I'm not sure if she heard me.
The day at the beach with Sara had certainly not turned out as I had expected. I had discovered the thrill of being exposed in public, one of my fantasies had been fulfilled and my appetite for exhibitionism had well and truly been whetted.
At the time I had no idea of the implications and consequences of what had just started out as a simple day at the beach. That day my life changed and the next day I would get a glimpse of a different future. And what part Bethany would play in it.
But that is another story, or more correctly those are other stories and I will keep that, or them, for another day.
Oh my! I had no trouble picturing the events of your story. I readily put myself in your position and found myself relishing in doing each successive bit including the climax!
It's unfortunate that you can only vote once. I gave 5 *s. I loved the build-up and the surrender to the inevitable, while admitting not only the dread, but the mental stimulation also. You have an ability to emote your feelings with your written word that is rare. Thank you for what must be a considerable effort & hopefully you will keep writing.....Pat
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I have read this story severaal times. Do you still lose your bikini in the water? The story being true is amazing.
I read this story and "The Next Day" -- unfortunately in inverse order -- and was most struck by how you captured the emotional response to learning that being exposed in public is something that excites you. It's a revelation that can be both terrifying and liberating at the same time and I was delighted to see how you conveyed that.
It's already been said in the other comments. It's a wonderful piece of writing and an amazingly hot story.
Hi Catherine
I have read two of your storis and will certainly read your other submissions. They have both been excellent. Very natural writing leaving me with a true sense of your feelings and the imagery during the event.
Nice sensual build-up, you can feel the desire and needs.
Cioa B
I could barely contain myself...pun intended! Excellent, please write more!
Thank you indeed Catherine. Well done on your opening submission. And your first story is great too.
David
And just phenomenal for a first submission.
We want more! Much more...
Such a lovely little first story! You expressed your feelings very well, giving me insight into the thrill of an exhibitionist. You dialogue is just right, too - something that is unusual in a first time writer. Will look forward to your next evolution.
What a sexy experience! The next time you could give the towel to Sara before she drove you home, or decline it when she offers it to you, just to get the thrill of maximizing the moments you spend naked in public.
In my opinion, getting naked sounds more like "Innocence Regained" than "Innocence Lost". Babies are born to the world naked. And they lose their innocence only moments later when they start the journey of a clothed life. lol
Being the only one naked – or among the naked minority – in a group or social situation is far more arousing than being naked when everyone else is naked. And nothing beats having a partner who understands your desire to realise your fantasies and dares you to your limits and beyond.
I’m pretty sure this will pave the way for even more audacious adventures! Keep ‘em cumming!