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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Lots of detail however it reads like an excuse. The readers will simply not care or retaib enough interest to even get to the end.

becontree2001ukbecontree2001uk4 months ago

Looking forward to refine a part 2 and how it progresses

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