by hornynri
Didn't expect the series to end so soon...this could have been so much more and better...little disappointed...
Uh oh, prepare for the incel outrage about posting in their sacred LW category. Great story btw. But you'll get a lot of hate from those losers.
It would have been more interesting if Mayank didn’t watch live video of Divya’s night with sheik. Divya would have continued her slut life and would have become a slut mom. Hats off to the author, the series was very focused and truly erotic and entertaining.
Very very good built up and story. Would have been bette if her slut life was more detailed out.... like leaving in hareem.... all her threesomes ...who and how she lost her anal virginity.
Good Build up. Poor end. She could have remained a good wife and continued her slut insticts under cover, while being a good housewife... Escapades involving odd situation and set up would have been nice.
This was a fun read, but the author had also written a ride of a story called 'Subjugation of Professor Sandhya' on a different site, unfortunately cut short by the toxicity of commenters there.
That site is no more, and I hope the author can post that story here as well, and perhaps, fingers crossed, a continuation.
Have to agree with others that the ending seemed abrupt and rushed but still loved the series.
Waiting for more from you.
Please continue the bela story. I badly missed you in xossip. Please finish the story by making bela through Shyam
cannot agree more with the comments:
"story called 'Subjugation of Professor Sandhya' on a different site, unfortunately cut short by the toxicity of commenters there.
That site is no more, and I hope the author can post that story here as well, and perhaps, fingers crossed, a continuation."
Chap-6 was the best and it would have been better if it this had explored a little more along those lines.
Looking forward to some more and a lot more :)
Best writer.
I second the comment on 'Subjugation of Professor Sandhya'. It was a great humiliation tale and deserves a full blooming.
I read your story about Sonal in another site but it was incomplete. Why don’t you post the complete story about Sonal?
I was a reader of your Divya story from the previous website days..and I was the one who suggested to you to make divya wear that red low saree in Bashir's party ! thanks mate for a wonderfully awesome story ...awaiting more such unputdownable stories from you with a single protagonist theme
Hello I'm a big fan since your work on the other side but since that site is down now I'm hopeful that you will add your work and all your stories here at this site they're all classics and very good work
One of my favourite stories from you would have to be subjugation of Professor Sandhya I hope you added to this site and please continue where you left off with Professor Sandhya on a leash by the train tracks with her lovers there's still a lot more places you could take the story
And I have a great suggestion for you I think it's up your alley someone with your talents could do a great job about a Muslim man having sex with a Hindu family wife or daughter aside from any events in reality I think it would make a very hot story and I think he's someone like you could do a great job please give it a try
Thank you for everything if you can get in contact with me I'll be more than happy to encourage you and even fund your endeavours..
You could write a sequel to this story, about what happened after the sheik turns the remote off. You could also add Divya's adventures after she became the sheik's concubine. This is one of the hottest series.
Beautiful! Please keep writing and nicely keeping each chapter in readable length and capturing many Indian mens approach.
Realistic situation and we'll paced which keeps it interesting.
Great conclusion with the Epilogue except probably Hubby Mayank should have been punished for being mean and Divya should have made him realize she did it also for his benefit.
All it needs is continuos persistent encouragement in the right direction from the husband who needs to be completed committed.
The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight Asian conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content.
Asian Indian women must understand nearly all woman 99% including their mother and sister have enjoyed and are enjoying outside marriage. It is perfectly fine. Only nobody talks about it openly like in the Western world.
Just love your narration.
This has to be the best story i have ever read ,
Keep this amazing work going
Will be ur fan always