All Comments on 'Innocent Visits her Sister at Uni'

That last sentence came out of nowhere. I feel like half of the story was cut out; you imply Sarah left no longer a virgin, but at no point did your story showcase that. Where's the rest? Good start, but this is an incomplete tale.

I understand your complaint. Sometimes I like to leave just a little to the readers imagination. Sorry if I left too much to the reader this time.