All Comments on 'Insestous Christmas Reunion'

WAIT, what? The end, are you serious? So much more fun to have yet. More please

Practice will help! Read more written works by others, get more descriptive (like yesterday), her tits her nipples, her gigantic hairy pussy (do not write any shitty and ugly shaved shit, with razor burn stubble, and pimples in the stubble), otherwise this story is exactly like you said, "that's the end folks," I rated this a 3. You can do better!

Proof Reading required.

The pause at the climax is a reasonable cliff hanger, but as other comments have indicated, a little extra time to check punctuation makes the reading smoother. Good luck!