All Comments on 'Insidious Angel Ch. 10'

by Long2bLocked

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The only word that comes to mind about this story is MASTERPIECE. Top draw writing once again, thank you.

King_MacAulayKing_MacAulayalmost 2 years ago

Well that is just freaking amazing. Turning romantic but still completely dominant, this was great. One of my favorite BDSM stories I've read on here without a doubt.

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 2 years ago

A masterful work of erotica!

You nailed it….sexual tension, character development, tempo and pacing of the story, the D/s dynamic, sub space…..all well written.

Each scene in this chapter was arousing on its own, and you sequenced it perfectly for a climactic ending!

Excellent!

Thank you….

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome,it will be tough to not see a new chapter each day

LoveRangerLoveRangeralmost 2 years ago

Just epic. Long2BLocked...you had me from the very first "STRIP!" Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

F-ING Fantastic!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wonderful story as always.

Please keep them coming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The best story i’ve ever read! Truly enjoyed ever word and sentence. Hope they both live happily ever after!

MsCarolMsCarolover 1 year ago

Absolutely wonderful! I enjoyed each and every chapter and looked forward to each one. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sweet, shows femdom can be loving

targetmantargetmanover 1 year ago

Best story on this site ever! Thanks!

wellrestedwellrestedover 1 year ago

wow - I loved the story and the ending is even better!

sbslavexsbslavexover 1 year ago

Amazing. Well done. From beginning to end. It felt so real to me. I give stories I really like five stars so that others will see and enjoy them, but this is a rare gem that is truly a five star masterpiece. You do so many things right. Everyone should read this.

LI KerwellLI Kerwellover 1 year ago

My god, it became a love story! A very erotic, lusty, love story.

Well done, well written, well closed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ugh! Shes nuts. Its all just too much. The chastity, the beatings, the dog cage, The public humiliation. Not healthy, He sould be relaxing playing golf, or fishing, something other than this silliness.

DaflingerDaflingerover 1 year ago

Thanks for telling this story and sharing an obvious passion. Thoroughly enjoyed this over the last few days and look forward to reading more of your efforts. Yum.

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UPDATE AUGUST 2022 I just released a new story. It began as a few thousand words and it became a novel. Ten chapters in all. It’s called [Insidious Angel]. It’s about a young dominatrix that sets out to enslave an older, vanilla man. Of course it has a female domination s...

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