All Comments on 'Insomnia Ch. 02'

It was going to be hard to follow Chapter 1 of this story, but you have absolutely surpassed yourself with this second part. Very well done once again - and another five stars. Thank you.

It's good and you build anticipation/sexual tension well. However, be careful of huge leaps that break the thread of suspension of disbelief for the readers. He unties her and she is already thinking in terms of 'her new master.' Damn, his magical cock is powerful if he hasn't even used it yet and she is ensorcelled. ;)

Love this story and the premise. Keep up the good work. I would have loved to see a longer more meatier chapter though.

There has tobe more.This is just a teaser.