All Comments on 'Internude Ch. 02: Between Times'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Outstanding follow up

Really enjoyed the different perspective. Your take on the specifics of frozen time were interesting as well. Great job with both stories.

Thanks and look forward to more.

majapromajaproalmost 4 years ago
kinky

I miss his innocence in using the watch

that he would seduce her to fall in love with him by stopping time, his skill in mastering time

but that would make the whole story different, yet you describe characters that could make that possible

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 4 years agoAuthor

One more to, ah, come... :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Twilight Zone

Your story is similar to one in the old tv series. Except in the end, the man with the watch broke it when robbing a bank. He was stuck frozen in time forever. Nice try though

yowseryowseralmost 4 years ago

A Timely Uncle

Luscious tale, otherworldly, absurdly arousing.

'My skill with differential equations was not matched by a skill with women.'

Perhaps this finally explains Newton.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Prequel?

Great series so far! Would love to see a story with Uncle Nick messing with his sister in-law! Any chance?

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Twilight Zone: Hmm. I've seen or read something like that. It's perfect poetic justice, in a way.

Prequel: I guess. Maybe. Will think about it.

yowser: I've always been partial to differential equations...

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