All Comments on 'Internude Ch. 05: Fresh Air and Forestry'

I did not think I would like this series, but I kept reading. It is bizarre and disturbing, yet one finds oneself hooked, mostly because it is well-written, but also because it is thought-provoking.

I don't mean to impose, but can we return to the story of Marcus and Kiera? You said a few chapters ago that timestop stories are better when the victim is complicit in the abuse, and I agree completely. I'd love to see how their relationship, such as it is, develops further

Wow: Bizarre and disturbing, I quite agree. Thanks!

Anon.: I've been having fun exploring this from different POVs, partly by request, partly because I'm not sure (yet) how to progress the Marcus and Kiera story. I did start something, but it went nowhere fast.

This series is quite possibly the best I've come across on here, I'm loving how you are setting the story to explain how Marcus is actually 'uncle nick's' son and how you are explaining how he is coming to get used to using the watch. When you come to go back to the Marcus/Keira story, I think you could explore Marcus becoming more daring with how and who he uses the watch on, explore the character as the horny young guy he is, as you did with Amy's mouth and the adult store clerks rimming

Thanks for the prompt... :-)

Chapter 6 is in the queue.