All Comments on 'Interrogated'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
wow

One of the best I've read honestly

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Lame, even with the unexpected ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice little twist

Good story with a little twist a the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So what happens next?

Is he going to take care of her or will he just turn her over to the police for more abuse? He already dislocated her pelvis when he fisted her so she would tell him where her father was. At least maybe the police will take care of her and her father from the mob. Maybe they will patch her up so that she will not be so traumatized by the police that were sworn to protect people. Well, I guess that there will always be police that will abuse their positions. It was a fantastic story and a quick turn of perspective at the end. Imagine, that a detective would go to such lengths to get a person to talk. I hope that there is some great aftercare for Carrie now that she was broken.

mikewozeremikewozereover 3 years ago

Nice. I'm amazed you managed to get it through moderation tbh; I've had stories rejected because the victim didn't get anything out of it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
BRILLIANT

Excellent writing!

LunaScarletLunaScarletover 3 years ago
Wow!

Didn't see that coming!

As a fantasy it's an amazing read, even if I'm not into fisting myself! It does require some suspension of disbelief, with that ending, because it leaves many questions unanswered... Maybe there'll be a part 2? On the bright side, he can afford to pay for the therapy and corrective surgery she'll need with his Detective salary!

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaosabout 3 years ago

Wow, there is a special place in hell for that guy. I hope someone fists his ass and fucks it with a serrated knife.

CaptainFortuneCaptainFortunealmost 3 years ago

Love this. Need more like it

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

These type of stories piss me off at the stupidity threatening to come in her like that’s the worse thing if u had to go through the trauma of rape the one thing u need is prove so him coming perfect he’s just signed his own arrest warrant an as he broke her pelvis he will be looking at a long time hopefully

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I hate this story so much I can't believe I read through the whole thing. I was hoping for something, anything to make it any less painful, hoping for a twist at the end. And what an ending I got. I was in disbelief. I try not to judge other peoples preferences but seriously, bleeding and tearing??? I am disgusted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's pretty funny that people think that a hand will dislocate a pelvis. Is this dude Shaq sized? Y'all know those are made for a whole human to come out, right? Lol

JustGoWithItJustGoWithItover 2 years agoAuthor

No, he’s Shaq.

OpalBatOpalBat9 months ago

This was fantastic! I’m begging for more!

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