All Comments on 'Intervention Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What took so long?! :P

One of my absolute favorite series on this site! It is one wild ride for Tommy and I hope Esmeralda gets to be with him too. Then Esmeralda, Tommy and Tina getting into it together. Then Tina, mom, and Nela going at it. Ahh too many fantastic possibilities! Keep on writing chunks!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
the best yet!!!

I was hoping you would continue this series, and you did. Now keep it going, this is one lucky man, and I'm very jealous of him! LOL.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
to bad

needs atleast one more chapter so he can pop ez's cherry and possibly julie's too maybe even get sis pregnant

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Need more chapter

One of the most exciting erotic stories I have read. Love the way your stories go with the characters and open nudity and sex with incest. Hope you can continue with some additional humor like sniffing musky pungent panties. and some ordinary walking around the house with the women sometimes wearing short t-shirts with no panties on bending to pick up something or sitting casually with their legs spread and can see their parted pussy lips. etc....

calamity989calamity989over 13 years ago
chapter

you could of placed another story where they either find love together just between them or if they choose to go in there own directions

im not one for reading orgie storys but this was pretty good i have to admit :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Intervention+

need more episodes from this group. I love this series and need more. Don't stop now, PLEASE.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
next chapter

whats next for the house of sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

1 Page, WHAT THE.... Okay, it's that I just really love the story and to hit the afterstory or at least a summary kind of sucks. But oh well, what can you do (many things in fact just to let you know).

Hart_cdnHart_cdnover 10 years ago
Very Hot!

More.... great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Everything was going along so well and then you introduced all this possessive stuff? That's way too conventional for the guy's lifestyle (which is the fun fantasy of the story). If the king announces to the harem whom his favorite is, the poor woman will be ostracized forever or dead by morning. Tom seems too sly to do that. He should have just put 'sis in rotation with the others.

"Il bello della vita" (Live the good life!)

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
there really can be too much of a good thing

The person who grows up working in a flower shop rarely gives flower

some one working the line in a chocolate factory enjoys a dish of ice cream

wine makers have a saying, it takes a lot of beer to make good wine

and

as much as someone who has never been there can dream about it, unlike women, there really is a limit to the ability of a man to "perform".

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Lol, well fortunately most women don't want sex every day so he should be OK, lol. Maybe when I hit my sixties or seventies I might have a performance limit, but in my late forties I'm still happily a glutton ;) Hell if I was in his shoes and didn't have a job to worry about then five times a day would be comfortably realistic ....that being my usual 30-60 minute runs, not the average Joe 2-1/2 to 7 minute runs, lol. Better since its different women so the variety is there, lol. ...but then my hormone level has never really dropped from what it was it was in my twenties, In still a horny bastard!

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8over 7 years ago
Brilliant story

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Story without a doubt..

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
He who makes the rules

Rules the house.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 4 years ago

WOW! LUCKY FUCKER! You better eat your Wheaties, Sucka.🤣

Aussie1951Aussie1951almost 4 years ago
What a great fantasy story

😂😂😂😂. My God, even with a pack of Viagra he still couldn’t satisfy six women. He’ll be dead in a week..But it’s good to dream. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

nashman1000nashman1000over 2 years ago

Another fantastic and sexy story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely love it, a clutch of hot sex crazed cunts to enjoy. I would be permanently drunk on cunt juice and fucklng my brains out. Sex crazed cunt lapping sex maniac, Lanc’s UK.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Would anyone need Viagra?

5*

BJ

blackknight314blackknight314about 2 years ago

Loved it... again... I read this about 2 years ago. Thanks again for sharing!

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticalmost 2 years ago

The magic has been broken.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Absolutely sucking fucking wonderful. Six sex crazed cunts to enjoy, the lucky fucker. My two live in fuck buddies their best friends and I are looking for two young teens ( 18/19 year old) bi girls possibly sisters to join our fucking frolics.

WoodencavWoodencavover 1 year ago

Awesome fucking mother and sister, I’ve always wanted my older sister, came close once but got disturbed, never got another chance. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

NICHOLXNICHOLXover 1 year ago

Nice happy finish, five stars.

JimmcdJimmcdover 1 year ago

The moment Tommy slid into his mom's wet cunt was just too much for me, I let every drop go, I spewed spurt after spurt into my imaginary mother,,,,5 out of 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great lifestyle fantasy but turned out to be less than the sum of all the possibilities. The sex was described kind of blandly and it was all over too soon. That's the danger of repetitive harem stories I guess. At least you didn't cop out and introduce rectal penetration or treating the women like sluts and other misogynist garbage as so many seem to do. Full credit for also not having a cuckold father or other males dragged into things.

londonteadrinkerlondonteadrinkerabout 1 year ago

5 out of 5. A little saddened to know the next Ch is the last but going to enjoy it for sure.

tsgtcapttsgtcapt7 months ago

Great foreshadowing... great story, thanks.

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