All Comments on 'Intimate Shower'

With the exception of the belt/strapping part, this sounds almost exactly what my wife and I did quite a few years ago. We now regularly include anal play with our other diversions.

5/5

Loving Wives is for extra-marital fun, swinging, sharing, etc. It is not a general sex category. Erotic couplings or Anal Sex would be better for this.

Who are these people, and why should we care? Maybe in Erotic Couplings you can just portray people having sex, and that fills the bill. But in Loving Wives we kinda expect a story that involves married people, doing something that involves sex with a spouse, or committing adultery, and the associated drama, maybe some suspense if the cheaters have not been caught yet, etc.

So, really glad your characters are enjoying each other so much. But why should I care, and why did you write about it?

LW=Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more.

This story about unknown people is little more than a sex scene. Does it fit any of the above description. No.

1* for wrong category.

But way wrong category.

Not because of wrong category, but because so-so writing, and no proper end (and no indication of Part 2 - if there’s one coming you should title this with “Part 1” - 2-stars

Oh gee! You surely do hurt some feelings when they can't find a cuck in your story. Good work.