All Comments on 'Into The Fire'

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DenkkarDenkkarover 17 years ago
What happens next?

This has a lot of potential, would really like to see what happens next. The way it ends right now is far too abrupt :(

Does the journey take us to a realm of hell? What does it mean that the woman is "going home"? Please tell us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Don't stop the story there!

More please! We need to know what happend to them next!!! It was a GREAT story, hope to read more of yours like this one.

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