by transientarts
A truly beautiful story.
Rich ion destabilize, and clearly heartfelt.
Also very ‘of it’s time’.
So they got married and shared a life together? How sweet. What happened to Marie? Hope she grew up happy and healthy. More chapters to fill in some gaps please?
Oh, you need to get Landon and Scott together more than the! Landon seems the rough, tough exterior, but he is a truly gentle man with Scott, helping Scott when he needs it most. He will be good for Scott. Please let them make love slowly, let them suck each other, and let their descriptions be known. I picture for imagine the manly Landon with a decent spread of hair for the at sexy chest. He seems "All man" for Scott. I'd like to see you explore their relationship further! More adventures, please!
Words like poetry.
Sweet sincere, and everyone loves a bit of an underdog. I sincerely hope you plan on writing a sequel.
Well done
Keep up the good stories. I really enjoyed it. It was short and sweet, with just the right amount of spice to get the blood flowing if you know what I mean. Keep them coming! Please!