All Comments on 'Introductions'

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69SoFine69SoFineover 8 years agoAuthor
I'd love to hear some feedback

Tell me what you thought! Alexis and I are really excited that people have enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A++

Only critique:

Could use more velvet sofas.

69SoFine69SoFineover 8 years agoAuthor
Hahahaha

When I showed the story to my friend Rachael and asked her what she liked about it her first response was, "well, there was this velvet sofa..."

ContrarianContrarianabout 8 years ago
Incredible story.

Well crafted, super hot build, and great dynamics between the three.

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