All Comments on 'Introspections Ch. 06'

by HR1983

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Oh my doG. The first chapter had me writing the longest anti-writer comment of my life, which I never posted, as that would have been just as mean and insulting as I thought you to be at that time. Am I ever glad I didn't. You have proven to be quite the opposite. Wow! Thank you for a story that has become a major positive distraction during sullen days.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wait what

What game in the dark... where was that mentioned b4 what chapter? Did he steel it film her on line our book journal? I missed that b4. And if it was not mentioned b4 then where was the build up to get the 'dark places'?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I hope my votes are registering.....

because I love this story

HR1983HR1983over 8 years agoAuthor
Re: wait what

She confessed to the games in chapter 3 after he locked her up for attempting to run away

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More please

and hurt her

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Anatomy 101: the hymen

It's surprising that a writer of your ability would make such an elementary error. The hymen is at the mouth of the vagina, not finger-deep in it. In the West, mostly it us broken by inserting (or more often, removing) a tampon. Please don't rely on history romances for your information. Look it up on Wikipedia.

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