by HR1983
It's surprising that a writer of your ability would make such an elementary error. The hymen is at the mouth of the vagina, not finger-deep in it. In the West, mostly it us broken by inserting (or more often, removing) a tampon. Please don't rely on history romances for your information. Look it up on Wikipedia.
She confessed to the games in chapter 3 after he locked her up for attempting to run away
What game in the dark... where was that mentioned b4 what chapter? Did he steel it film her on line our book journal? I missed that b4. And if it was not mentioned b4 then where was the build up to get the 'dark places'?
Oh my doG. The first chapter had me writing the longest anti-writer comment of my life, which I never posted, as that would have been just as mean and insulting as I thought you to be at that time. Am I ever glad I didn't. You have proven to be quite the opposite. Wow! Thank you for a story that has become a major positive distraction during sullen days.
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