All Comments on 'Intrusion'

I loved that! I didn't quite understand it but the idea gets through really well! Callidora, you have a way with words like no other. Hot and horny is I, and like a hungry child, I want seconds. So, can we expect more like this? Maybe longer ?

You've written one very enjoyably descriptive piece of writing. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it from start to end. :)

it was relatively amusing to say really made no sense to me actually sounds like the intruder need sex to live or something it's interesting but more details please :)

Loved this. Just, so slick, well written, and exotic. thanks. v