Invitation to Paradise

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"You know, you could always call in sick," it simply said.

Bradley stared at the message another few seconds, then looked out the car window, shifting his gaze up toward what he now knew was the window of Maureen's bedroom. Sure enough, she was standing there wearing nothing more than a short, sheer robe, one that couldn't help but remind him of what was beneath it. Turning back to his phone, he thought about it a few more moments, then scrolled down to his boss's number.

"Well, if you feel that bad, kid, maybe it's better that you spend the day in bed," the day manager said after Bradley told him that he wouldn't be coming in.

"Oh, don't worry, Mr. Walsh, that's exactly where I intend to spend it," Bradley replied, suddenly not feeling the least bit tired at all.

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WillJackWillJackover 1 year ago

Great story: the writing is excellent, good pace, good sex descriptions, and a couple of laugh-out-louds, which I consider essential for this genre. I am particularly drawn to truly female-positive writing, where the women are believable agents, not just objects, which I have had a hard time finding on this site. (So sad.) I am new at this, just posted my first story, which I believe you might like, and I would welcome any feedback you might care to offer. A new fan, WillJack (an old[ish] hetero married guy).

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

Nice buildup.

But once the sex started, it zoomed. Needed much more in the way of preliminaries/foreplay.

Some extended playing with his cock and his balls.

Perhaps, after he'd showed that he liked her breasts, some titty fucking and mouth action on the head of his cock on the upstrokes.

The 'eating-pussy-lesson' really wasn't a lesson. He jumped right in. Needed some preliminaries, playing with it, kissing around it, kissing it, onstructions when to begin using his tongue -- and where, and how.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love that older hairy pussy. Some young guys have no idea what they are missing by turning down an older hot woman. As a young man of about 20, I was shocked that a couple of older women (about 70 years old) would proposition me. I had always thought that pussy my age was best. But, little did I know that some of the wettest sweetest pussy have grey hair. Now, in my 70's, I know just how good it is.

theclenerdudetheclenerdudealmost 2 years ago

Great story. One that brought me to the first time I made love with my wife. I'm 74 an she's 70. So forget loosing the urge as you get older. It just takes a little longer to reach orgasm but I've paid attention and brought her to orgasm each and every time, something other lovers haven't taken the time to accomplish.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Your storytelling is so well arranged, articulated and paced it is seductive in itself.

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