by Scheherazade88
Borrowing a title from John LeCarre does not make you a writer. Grow up, get an education and try again.
I do not take suggestions from non-people anonymous, why don't you grow up, and stop trying to be a keyboard worrier. And why don't you get yourself a name while you're at it.
I like the character, Zahra. She's a sexy spy. I think this series can do well. Watch your tenses though, you jump from past to present. I think also you can go into more graphic detail during the actual sexual element. Keep going!
She, being Persian, is pretty much the definition of Caucasian, so she is white. Where does the interracial part come in?