All Comments on 'Iranian Enigma Ch. 01'

by Scheherazade88

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Is this meant to be a joke?

Borrowing a title from John LeCarre does not make you a writer. Grow up, get an education and try again.

Scheherazade88Scheherazade88over 10 years agoAuthor

I do not take suggestions from non-people anonymous, why don't you grow up, and stop trying to be a keyboard worrier. And why don't you get yourself a name while you're at it.

sexylilthingsexylilthingover 10 years ago
Not bad

I like the character, Zahra. She's a sexy spy. I think this series can do well. Watch your tenses though, you jump from past to present. I think also you can go into more graphic detail during the actual sexual element. Keep going!

hindsight2020hindsight2020about 9 years ago
Curious.

She, being Persian, is pretty much the definition of Caucasian, so she is white. Where does the interracial part come in?

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