All Comments on 'Irene and Jack Ch. 01'

Great story, cannot wait for Chapter 2.

I'm put off by the racial tropes in this story and in the Ted and Lindy story. It seems all of the antagonists are black stereotypes. Even folks who speak in black vernacular are dynamic and even black folks from the ghetto are more than where they are from. It was just a little disappointing to run into that type of thing in what are two well-written stories.

Just finished this enjoyable story. Loved the characters names: my Aunt was Ingrid and mother was Irene!

I really enjoyed this chapter. Got lost a few times as to which character was telling the story.