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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
typos, writing

A lot of typos and overall poor writing. This piece needs a serious editing job. Particularly in need of a fix is poor sentence structure. Run on sentences are common. Writing is hard work - no doubt about. Work on it.

Villan2242Villan2242almost 4 years agoAuthor
I'm working on it.

Thanks I'm attempting to improve.

Villan2242Villan2242almost 3 years agoAuthor

I have re-edited this story due to justified criticism.

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Welcome. New to story writing. Constructive feedback is welcome. My latest series, which I have been writing for the past five years is about a 50-year-old widow, Eliza who has some amazing sexual experiences, staggering life-changing times and a mind blowing inheritace.. ...

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