All Comments on ''Irish Twins' Home Alone Sequel'

Great story with very descriptive scenes.

On a down note, your use of "Irish twins" is overdone. I know for an incest story you want to highlight that. But you could have changed it up a few times with "younger sister" or just "brother" and "sister". And hopping into the minds of characters in the sex scene scripts was a little confusing.

But I give it a 5.

Good story, well paced, medium decent character development. I felt a bit rushed at the end, sort of, "I don't know where else to go, let's just wrap this up." Andy's decision to drop his plans and follow Albert and his furry to California had no foundation laid and left his relationship with Sissy unresolved. Unfeeling and out of character as established for Andy. A solid 4 stars.

Hate it!

In the end the two Irish Twins meant NOTHING to each other, Which I thought was the point of the story to begin with.Horrible ending. They should have ended up together Should have never made a sequel.

Get an Editor!

Horrible ending! 😢 I'll repeat what an anonymous user said a few days ago. I thought was the point of the story to begin with was that the Irish Twins were in love with each other, but you totally destroyed it?

Also, your editor does a horrible job. Take for instance:

"It was one of Hank's chauvinistic anarchisms ..."

Did you possibly mean "anachronism"? Anarchy is chaos, which didn't make sense for the way that you used it.

Honestly, while I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter, this one totally sucked big fat donkey dick. I was bored out of my skull by the time that the parents began debating on how they could manage to separate Andy and Sissy. I stopped reading at that point and skipped to the last page. I read the final page in disbelief. I was hoping for the siblings to stay together no matter what obstacles were put in their way. But you turned Andy into a heartless jerk who only cares about getting laid and his sister basically forgets about him and gets engaged to another man.

I'm glad that I didn’t waste my valuable time reading the other nine pages in between. I hate this story now. 😒

1/5

Sadly, I agree with a number of these comments… I expected Andy to grow up, realize his foolishness, and figure it out. Frankly, there’s no way he’d be stupid enough to not call her. People mature… they don’t go backwards. This is not up to your standards

So disappointing, Author needs another 10 chapters to fix this debacle.