All Comments on 'Is it Hereditary?'

by IFOnle

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walkingeagle over 6 years ago

Great Story!

I enjoyed this!

Please write more!

Great job!

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Difficult to follow

I feel as though there are at least three different but connected stories/chapters that could have been fleshed out. The chopping from past and present was disjointed. I kept reading because it seemed to have good potential.

Us_Two4play over 6 years ago

Clever and Subtle

And fun.

Well written and arousing concept.

Please continue. We look forward to more of this quality!

Anonanonymous over 6 years ago

Hot!

Wow!

You go girl!

This is super...welcome to literotica.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Waiting Expectantly

Next chapter please...

Please, please, please

(that hum you hear in the background is my fave vibe...waiting)

OENsHIM over 6 years ago

Raising the Bar

Some really good writers here.

Please take your seat at the top table.

More please...asap

Anonymousover 6 years ago

I wanted the spy game to continue with him having to throw away an item of clothes every time he lost. Make him totally vulnerable. A good story nonetheless.

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