All Comments on 'Is it True?'

And aggravating at the same time. Extraordinary descriptions, an intense inner pull into the main character, who you want to root for one moment and slap silly the next. (Maybe like all of us?) The tension is dynamic, the outcomes ultimately satisfying, quite a roller coaster. Well written.

This is definitely a good story. I enjoyed the fact he was average sized and he got pissed at Millie for her insult.

Thank you all for the positive comments and all the people that enjoyed this story. It really means a lot. Deep apologies for the punctuation and grammar errors that slipped through into the final version. I'm trying to do the editing myself. Hopefully this will not happen in future submissions. I would also appreciate feedback on some of my other stories.

Don’t get me wrong the story was great but it just lacks on the ending. How do I put this the ending was like something written for Disney lol. Nearly all of these interracial stories end up pregnant you got to forget about implants and all that crap. You basically have to write your stories like you are playing Russian roulette in the interracial category what you wrote as I said was great but it was like made for Disney. Like at the moment the hottest thing in the interracial category at the moment are Exchange students moving in with a white couple. And the wife ends up pregnant with the students kid or black teenager and a white teacher who ends up pregnant with the teenagers kid . Or a white couple take in a lodger and the wife ends up pregnant with the lodgers kid . These are the types of stories that are hot in the interracial category but do you notice one thing that it’s a let’s say a thing that the stories end up with a pregnancy. Do you get what I’m trying to tell you about your stories they are good but not eye catching ok .