All Comments on 'Isaac Captured'
by sexy_snake
- 8 Comments
Anonymousabout 15 years agoThe story as posted is delightful, but the "ending" (actually, just a stopping point) was a surprise in that there was no forewarning to the reader (e.g., that "Ch.01" designation so commonly used).
-- KK in Texas
Anonymousabout 15 years agosince she's committed about 14 felonies so far....Pistolpackinpete
Anonymousover 14 years agoPUNISHMENT...IE. HAVE HER FACE AND BODY TATTOOED..AND OR DROP
HER OFF IN THE BAD SECTION OF TOWN TO BE GANGBANGED AND THEN DO SOMETHING YEARS LATER AFTER SHE WAS MARRIED OR IN A STABLE RELATIONSHIP. HAVE HER IMPREGNATED, WITHOUT HER KNOWLEDGE.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI stopped reading shortly after the insertion of the third finger as I was more and more annoyed by the recurring mistake of then and than and some other errors.
Else so far nice sory idea and story telling, but it needs better language and/or editing skills.
Anonymousover 7 years agoWhere is the law in your idiotic crap? She has to kill him otherwise she goes to prison for a long long time!!!
