All Comments on 'Isabel, The Beauty Next Door Pt. 03'

Really loving the sweet and loving tone of this story, keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to more

Not 100% sold on the plot, particularly with this part moving at a glacial pace. However, your characterization is amazing. These are some of the best characters in the entire Lit site.

After your first part, several comments praised the plot but said you needed an editor. I was in agreement. I've given you your third 5-star rating because I totally forgot to think about tense changes and spelling errors. Great job! A couple more parts and then I'll start looking for something else from you. By the way, my sister used to live on Barnstaple Crescent in Winnipeg. After a glance at the map, I now know where Barnstaple is.

Believeable and creative plot. Good dialog and plot advance. Looking foward to story development. Echo other comments on spell checking, editing to enhance readibility.

Holy smokes! For a bloke who said he'd "try" writing a story after reading so many, I say you've solidly hit the proverbial nail right on the head! Way to come out swinging! I'm a fan, and I'm dutifully impressed! Well done, please don't stop! Yes, it's a lot of exclamation points, but, my new favorite author, i am that excited about what you're writing. 5 stars!

Thank you for your kind words. I am still a beginner, and am learning as I go. I do have other stories to share, but will keep it at just the one for now. I would like to say how difficult it is to write a story in present text. I will also watch the punctuation.

Another thanks to Rex, he has not only helped with my edits, but given me some good tips on my english. I do have to leave the house sideways, so my head fits through the door. Please keep the comments coming.

Thank you

Bamo68

Great story so far. Can’t wait to read more!!!!

Keep this going

Loving this!