All Comments on 'Isabel, The Beauty Next Door Pt. 07'

The moment I read about the reconstruction in your other story Micheal or Mac, the first person who came to my mind was James. I thought you would make a crossover maybe. Thanks. Can't wait to see what happens now. How the 4 characters will meet and how their meeting will go. Maybe something dramatic. Maybe you make a new story about their crossover. Well, it's upto you.

Love the crossover story. I hope that it is soon.

Nicely done with the crossover. It’s interesting how James’ parents still favor Bradly. James’ actions and injuries saved a little boy. When his parents visited him in hospital, Bradly didn’t visit and his parents didn’t mention Bradly’s reaction to the news. Even after James returned home to recover, nothing from Bradly. They have a party for James and Izzy before Cambridge, and no Bradly. Then Bradly has a Christmas Eve game, and James is shamed into attending. After all of that, when it came out how Bradly told people that James stole Izzy, that would be the last time I’d attend any of his events, even if his mother got upset.

I love Brit stories. After a rough first page or so, this turned out very well. We do need to see more of these two in the future though. Well done.

I have been enjoying this series of Isabel, The Beauty Next Door and Michael or Mac. I am happy you are doing a cross over, it seems to fit.

Since I start reading your work I have notice your writing and spelling has improved (not sure if someone reviewing your work or not) keep up the great write with the characters and story line.

Again a great plot line with good continued character development. Adding the crossover is a stroke of genius. Well done.

Great story looking forward to the next chapters.

Great plot and characters. Looking forward to the blended story.

Can't wait to read more of this story and already knew of the crossing of both story's.5 stars

Just finished all of your Literotica published work... Now depression is setting in as I will have to go back to forgotten favorite authors list. Even got used to British colloquialism.

I have now finished all 3 of your series to this point. Loved the tie in between the Isabel and Michael/Mac stories. My only critique would be to watch the idioms between UK and USA. Here we have bathing suits, not swimming costumes. Lawyers, not solicitors. People attend college, not Uni or universities. You get the idea. Otherwise, great job, and i look forward to the next installments of each story.