All Comments on 'Isabel, The Beauty Next Door Pt. 09'

Great story as always!

You are truly merging the 2 stories, very well done!

Wow. More please

Sad this tale is coming to an end. So very well done!

5/5

Nicely written XXI century fairytale with xxx twist. Good job!

A bit muddled in its opening but.... then your normal excellent work returned.

Am going to be sad when the story finishes.

Only thing better would be to throw in Taylor Swift and Travis Kelce. After all Taylor appeared in Hannah Montana so she knows Miley. And Jay does have a box at Jacksonville Jaguars.....

That chapter covered a lot of ground. Nicely written, and mostly uplifting. The dynamics of the relationships and living arrangements are quite creative. Mac and Jay are fun characters to read about; but it was fun reading when Jay’s mother sided against Bradly; and Megan emerged as one who keeps Bradly under control.

Thank you for this installment, very enjoyable read.

So very well written.

Brilliant as always. Hope you more than just one more chapter for this story.

I've really liked this story from way back in the beginning when it was first posted and I'm very pleased to see this new chapter. I'm already looking forward to the next installment and thank you for your effort to write it!

Like most of the comments, I loved this story. I will be sorry at it's end.

Thank you for the wonderful tale you have spun.

Your story telling is so very good and brings happiness to all of us that read them. We all need a "feel good" story and it is how you write and bring this to us that keeps us coming back to read and often re-read your works. Thank you.

Loved the storyline and the way you meandered through the second half. The first half felt like someone else was writing the story. It was a shame that you closed down the story links between this & Mac but I understand why.

Great story. I’m going to miss the fun banter between the 4 main leads.

Brilliant chapter in a brilliant series.

Can't wait for the next chapter

Very nice read.

Can't wait for the final chapter. This has been such a feel good series.

a beautiful story,great character building and plot,you are telling a proper love story built around a well built detailed and geographically interesting destinations.i read the first couple of chapters a few years ago and then lost the thread,luckily i have been able to relocate you through the story series facility we now have.listen you had a few negative comments on spelling(have any of them actually put a story together?i fancy not.don't take the negativity to heart you are doing a great job,cannot wait for further continuation

An excellent story, well told [apart from the odd typo and the cnfusing first names of Jay's mum amd isabel's mum] but I agree with the comment, 'Don't take the negativity to heart'. It is easy to criticise when 'you' don't actually write something yourself. I love your style of writing, Just keep going.

Sort of a nice story, but too much angst. I skipped ahead 5 chapters just cuz.

Wonderful story. I hope you change your mind and continue this story. Your short story's are good but your three main storys are brilliant, can't wait for more of them.

I already commented - it's a 5/5, one of my literotica favourites (and favourite of this author). I have just read next chapter will be the last one. Well, I enjoyed the story and will be sorry to see it done and characters 'frozen' in completed story, but I can also understand - how can you develop character beyond chapter 10, who conqeuered the world on all possible fronts in the first 9 chapters? Still, there is quite a few topics I hope to see closed in chapter 10. I hope the story will not terminate open-ended/ unfinished (take your pick):

1. relationship James - Drew: important character, clearly in love with him, it would be cruel to close this chapter with easy way out 'she met the men who took her heart taking no prisoners, she lived happily with him ever after with great friendship and collaboration with James'

2. relatioship James - Hannah/ Sam (more children? more intimacy? most of the story MC was strongly against natural insemination of Sam... and then in chapter 9 he did)... neighbours and friends with childres would feel underwhelming

3. relationship James - Izzy: children. they both wanted them even if a bit later.... with Sam's twins it would make more sense to get Izzy pregnant soon

4. relationship James - Bradley - just to close loose end

5. younger siblings' future - just to close loose end