All Comments on 'Island Discipline Ch. 21'

...for this late in the story. the ending is surely near and if it in any way satisfies, then this story is one of the all-timers! hugz to cyberdiva!

The last 2 chapters (20 &21) have been much better. Please keep it up. We like to read about good things happening to Krtisty. But what's next?

Your story seemed really interesting and I wanted to read it but I found your use of "&" instead of "and" too distracting. If you simply used "and," it could make a world of difference!