All Comments on 'Island of Inappropriate Compliments'

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JeanCFNMJeanCFNMabout 1 year ago

Quite a good story … some good scenes but it seemed to go nowhere... what happened to him that he sees his wife naked and dried come but had no reaction when he had punched people just for a comment.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 1 year ago

I wanted this story to continue! Maybe you'll write a sequel? I love the implicit brainwashing in the story, both to Becca and Jeff, over on the other side of the island. I guess all of us uptight people would benefit from a stay on that particular island, experiment or not! I think with a lot of psychological experiments they tell the subjects one thing, but it's really something else that's going on. It seems to be the case here. 5* from me, JBE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is a pretty original and smart theme and it does make me question if inappropriate remarks are "really" wrong. Maybe if society normalized inappropriate remarks as compliments, we would have a very different society and this story seems to "corrupt" characters simply by changing the rules around them. Brilliant!

I wouldn't say this story made me super horny, it was the theme that kept me reading. But that cd be coz i am into bimbofication and brainwashing lol.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

That felt very abrupt. Should have had a few snapshots of the brainwashing in progress, instead of a whole-ass 9-day timeskip. The final results of the brainwashing could also have been explored a bit more.

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Writer of mostly oddball comedy and ridiculous situations. I've also written other stuff that actually paid the bills.