All Comments on 'Island of Submission Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Holy shit this is the greatest comeback of all time! I really did not expect this story to continue, but I am so happy it has. Hope you keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
MORE!

I would like to read more, much more, continue your excellent work

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

terrific! Can't WAIT for the next chapter. Consider a scene on the plane. Two alternative possibilities: either getting it on in secret on a commercial flight OR a scene on a private plane which is outfitted for play.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Come on, Gorson - your fans applaud your work, and want MORE!!!

Writer2000Writer2000over 3 years ago

I really enjoyed reading this super erotic story. It is very well written. Your description of the girls is red hot and highly arousing. The story opens up many possibilities for future chapters. I hope you will continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I can't add much more the other rave reviews. I WILL, however, request MORE chapters. Great reading, excellent use of language. Please accede to the multiple requests for more chapters!

sleekjillsleekjillover 1 year ago
wish there was more

just wishing for more ... thanks for the amazing story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The Author depicts feminine beauty with great skill, and deserves our thanks for that. But I found no eroticism in his tales, despite beauty, nudity, and sex there. Eroticism is something else entirely. Well, to civilized people, at least.

Vittorio Vittorossi

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Hi, I massively appreciate any feedback and votes - it really does motivate me to write more. I'm returning to writing here after a bit of a gap, and hope to make a good contribution. Really enjoyed many stories on this great site.

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