by gorson
Holy shit this is the greatest comeback of all time! I really did not expect this story to continue, but I am so happy it has. Hope you keep writing
terrific! Can't WAIT for the next chapter. Consider a scene on the plane. Two alternative possibilities: either getting it on in secret on a commercial flight OR a scene on a private plane which is outfitted for play.
I really enjoyed reading this super erotic story. It is very well written. Your description of the girls is red hot and highly arousing. The story opens up many possibilities for future chapters. I hope you will continue.
I can't add much more the other rave reviews. I WILL, however, request MORE chapters. Great reading, excellent use of language. Please accede to the multiple requests for more chapters!
The Author depicts feminine beauty with great skill, and deserves our thanks for that. But I found no eroticism in his tales, despite beauty, nudity, and sex there. Eroticism is something else entirely. Well, to civilized people, at least.
Vittorio Vittorossi