by imaging
Loved it! It had me checking my favorites and hoping for the next chapter right from the start!
An amazing 1st effort at a longer piece. Loved every bit of it. Your future efforts now have a very high bar to live up to. Thanks for taking us along.
Sequel! Sequel! This has been one of the best stories in Literotica in ages. Tim and Jen are a great couple and their sexual awakening journey has been superb. Please keep it going!
A fantastic series! I csnt wait to see what Jen and Tim get up to next! I'm thinking thinking about a swing party orgy! 😄
Great story. Small criticism hope you don't mind. Tim never performs cunnilingus on his bride. One of the most erotic stories I've read on Literotica. Thank you very much.
I checked my favorites every day. I could read it forever. Much better than "setting, uncertainty, sex with abnormally large cocks" all in 3 paged.
Really enjoyed this story, especially the surprise at the end. What a launching point for a sequel.
Looking forward to whatever comes next. Thanks for your effort.
A very enjoyable read, and stimulating. Well written with plausible conversations as narrative. Not spoiled with excessive grunts and screams....just intense feelings shared naturally. One of the best stories I've ever found in Literotica. I hope you will write more, and soon. Thank you for this wonderful story of a couple's growth and adventures.
A sequel would be great to read. The cats out of the bag and they're not on the island now. How far are they willing to go? Great story
A sequel would be great. There's definitely several directions you could take these characters now that they anonymity of where they live and the safety net of being far away in vacation is gone. Great job of writing. Looking forward to more
"I do have thoughts about a sequel."
Yes, please! Looks like more fun with Mickey and Kate, obviously very discreet considering... And like Mickey and Kate go back to the resort at least once a year and sometimes more, it would make sense for Tim and Jen to do the same. After all, Jen has unfinished business with some store keepers, among others. And of course, there are always new friends (and lovers) to make. And it would be a shame to leave Tim out of the fun. Both of them playing and exploring with new friends in the context of a strong, loving marriage is far better than just turning Jen into a slut ready to take on any new cock, which would ruin the story line. You've really done great so far, so keep up the good work!