All Comments on 'It All Just Came Together Ch. 02'

Your writing is very compelling. It makes be feel as though I was there with all of you, watching, enjoying all of it. Even not being able to be a part of it, I am not just turned on by witnessing everything, I am actually satisfied - in a way. It's all very sweet loving. Thank you!

I was somewhat concerned about where chapter one would lead...but you pulled it off nicely, no cheating remorse, no guilt or accusations, but just sweet fulfillment. Good Job!

I was somewhat concerned about where chapter one would lead...but you pulled it off nicely, no cheating remorse, no guilt or accusations, but just sweet fulfillment. Good Job!

I really enjoyed reading this story. My mind was captured and it felt like I was there with you. Oh how I wish I was. You and your husband seem like very sensual people and wonderful lovers. That's what made it very believable. My only complaint is that it was so short ... I'm a bit greedy ... I want more... PLEASE....

The comment 'you little slut' - even said jokingly - seemed to jar a bit. It seemed out of context with the gentleness of the piece.

...what a pity that you did not continue.

Worse than chapter 1, if even possible. You picked a great time to stop writing.