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All Comments on 'It Had to Be You'

by Verhaalen

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muskyboymuskyboy10 months ago

Way over the top dialogue.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy10 months ago

From one generation to the next!

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Sure a lot of highfalutin talk in this one!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

That first sentence screamed for an editor, long, unpunctuated, painful to read, and just... not good writing. I sort of tuned out then and there.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

when did Cheltenham town become a city ?. Never is the answer

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A short story writer in various genres. Of Dutch birth but living in the UK for many years. I appreciate comments but do not respond to them, sorry.