All Comments on 'It has Always Been You!'

Great story, I wonder what will happened if he gets her pregnant.. 🤰🏼

An kind of interesting story. I wasn't going to finish it as there were a number of typos and punctuation/capitalization problems as well as odd dialog. Then when I read that the kids bedrooms were on the first floor and the kitchen and parent's bedrooms were downstairs, I realized that this is not written in 'American English' or that English is your second language. Understanding that makes theses small problems easier to tolerate. Keep writing; maybe if you can find an editor to help you with the simple mechanics of writing, your subsequent stories will be even better.

So. Very. Hot.

This is far from great literature, with a variety of issues. You'll probably be getting some comments on that,but I think it's great as is.

5*

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Now this isn't the best story. Keep trying.

An editor will help with all of the grammar and punctuation istakes that made this such a mess to read. Keep writing, as it is the only way to get better, but get some assistance.

He must fuck the sister, who saw him fucking the cousin.

Cum belongs inside her pussy

Do explain how she can lock the door to his room, yet he’s able to enter?

Carry on with the cousins, then add on the sister.. I'm sure you can cum up with a way to involve them both..