All Comments on 'It Just Happened Ch. 09'

by REGade

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Does everybody take the low road in this story?

So far, only Millie has any honor left.

bruce22bruce22about 16 years ago
Excellent storytelling

I think that they are just being human beings.

The rigid super moral people are possibly a

fantasy. In my opinion everyone is vulnerable to

lust. The author does a good job of portraying the

mental state at such times.

JennyBearJennyBearabout 16 years ago
I love it

Yes! What goes around comes around.

GaryAPBGaryAPBabout 16 years ago
With only three chapters to go

and so much to cover to get to a conclusion. Very well done

Harryin VAHarryin VAabout 16 years ago
wow This is a MUCH better chapter

somewhat predictable but Much better. I am now actually looking foward to reading more of this story. Ben should of waited until he had more info about what exactly happened-- instead of It just Happenee - between Jen and his brother 4 years ago. But hey this is the author 's story and given how obessed he is with Jen I can see Ben throwing caution and common sense to the wind and fucking her on the side. well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Lucky Man

He is such a lucky man that his girlfriend cheated and married his brother. Then cheats on her husband with him. Imagine being married to such a wife. Baby on the way?

Good story so far, but don't like the characters.

BigFtHunterBigFtHunterabout 16 years ago
Looking good

Cant wait till this guy takes over the world. LOL

ralphcralphcabout 16 years ago
where does fault lie regade

did brother seek out jen and take advantage of her and ben? did jen just get caught up in the moment and make a human mistake , as we all do, or was she just looking for a home. i guess all is fair in love and war , but if ben's bro went after her in her depression of being without ben, or if he paid ben's tuition to keep him out of the way, he's a lowlife who deserves what he gets. a friend of mine came a long way to visit me years ago and a friend set him up with a princess of a blind date ( the few i ever had were dogs). he really liked her (i did too) and he planned on her comming to visit him in the future but over the next year it just didn't happen. they had not had sex and i really wanted to take her out. i never contacted her but kept asking him if they were ever going to get together. finally he figured i may as well go for it as nothing materialized out of his phone efforts. i called her and found out she spent a year waiting for me to call her. she hadn't even really been hoping to build a relationship with him. we've been together now for 26 years.she had been a goody girl and wasn't that good in the sack but there was something special about her to me. i was a dr and had been around some to say the least. i used to worry about how good sex would be when me and mine got over the hill.i got her to doing keegles and her pussy is so fine now i almost cry for joy (she did also learn how to fuck which really helped). she was very headstrong and stubborn and life was the pits for several long periods but the last several years have really been great. i often wonder if others would experience the same nervana if they stuck it out when the going got tough.i sure am glad i didn't "knock-her-in-the-head" (very hard) on several occasions. i guess i kind of hope jen and ben get back together. i damned sure would not have interloped on my brothers love interest, as i didn't on my friend's. that's why i would like to know how it "it just happened".thanks regade. rc

user110user110over 7 years ago
ed cant get her pregnant

so the slut seduces the stupe. and make no mistake, folks, ben is profoundly stupid.

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