All Comments on 'It Started At Christmas Pt. 01'

by KirstieH

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xDarkAngel0xDarkAngel0over 2 years ago

I liked the story. A great start. A couple of spelling issues, but look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I can’t wait to hear about the break up!

adeleduboisadeleduboisover 2 years ago

Lovely start - looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really need to check the spelling and male/female identifiers especially during Proof Reading. It is the little bits that truly enhance a story. Your tale is fun and offers plenty of opportunity for sequels, whiche I am sure a lot of readers await.

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